Thursday, 2 August 2018

Lucy the Lion-by Angelina

Learning Intention:We are learning to write a narrative story.
Success Criteria:I know I am successful when I can use adjectives, capital letters and full stop correctly.
                   Lucy the Lion 
A long time ago there was a lion . Her name was Lucy. She had a soft mane and hair and she like eating meat. She met a friend and they played together.

When they were done they went back home.For 5 days they played but on the 6th day Lucy's friend didn't came back.  One day she saw her friend who told her that she was moving to another zoo. Lucy, was very sad.

But she just said goodbye . The next few days, Lucy was sad but at the same time she was happy because her friend was in her heart.
 Lucy loved playing with new animals.`

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